Stage 2 · Win the work · Stop 10 of 11

What we sent

The back alley's bill so far: 40 weeks · See the bill

The information · The sealed envelope

Submission day. Whatever goes out now is what's been promised. Somebody had better know exactly what that is.

The wrong way

Win the workWin the work: Friday, 11.40am…
Five finals

Five versions called FINAL. Three people editing. Everyone has their favourite.

11.59

Someone uploads FINAL_v3_USE_THIS. Nobody is sure it was the right one.

Received

The portal says RECEIVED. Everyone goes home. Nobody keeps a copy of exactly what was sent.

Win the workWin the work: Six weeks later…
What did we say?

The client asks what the bid promised about handover. Tom, the bid manager, opens five windows.

Tom: It was in FINAL. Or FINAL_FINAL. Possibly Tom's edits. I'm Tom.

Their copy

The client reads out their copy. It promises something nobody remembers writing.

A week

A week of arguing about a sentence nobody remembers writing, and nobody can prove they didn't.

Tom: It does sound like me.

Five finals, one upload, and a promise nobody remembers making.

+1 week on the back alley's bill: No record of what was sent: a week arguing about a promise nobody remembers writing.

See the right way